8 Mistakes to Avoid
in Your Fantasy Novel’s Opening
Don’t let common mistakes lose your readers!
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… struggling to convert the vivid scenes of your fantasy novel from your imagination to the page?
… stuck in a loop where you constantly rewrite your opening pages?
… worried your story won’t resonate with your readers?
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As a developmental editor & book coach, everything I post is designed to help you build your creativity, strengthen your prose, and explore new avenues in your writing. The opinions in each post are my own, but many are inspired by ideas from established authors and editors who excel in their fields.
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Capture Your Readers from Your First Scene
Download my exclusive guide—8 Mistakes to Avoid in Your Fantasy Novel’s Opening. Start your fantasy novel right!
Are you worried you've failed to establish a bond between readers and characters in your first chapter? Do you wonder if you've bogged readers down with your worldbuilding? Do you sometimes overlook essential conflicts? Many readers will put your book down if it doesn't grab their attention right away, so it's vital to evoke powerful emotions from readers as early as possible.
Don't let these common mistakes rob your story of its magic and momentum. Save your precious time and energy by ensuring you hook readers from the start. Grab your guide now and check your opening against these common missteps!
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